It would be so much better if he was quite a bit more degrading, name calling, and just overall humiliation to the point of her experience of shame and embarrassment, like this 6 hrs recording of her finest moment/ accomplishment of her life.
Lots of complaints about the narrator, if i was her i would really like his direction. The dominance ,with him talking, giving her commands but being a bit low energy on the insulting and disrespectful/degrading treatment. Its so fire i am watching it again rite now.